I thought that the piece was poignant and amazingly written. I was particularly affected by the bittersweet ending where the mother heard the daughter disappear. I think it was beautiful that she could celebrate her daughter’s freedom and peace rather than just mourning and missing her. The theme of isolating difference is so important and this story of blossoming through that to become your own person was heart-warming. I think that the idea that something which someone might class as a defect, transforming into something wonderful is so applicable to everyone and our lives. The beginning of her story was one part that touched me, when the mother feels guilty that Rowen was handled and held by the doctors before her. I could feel the sense of the mother’s desperation to hold her child and give her the life she feels she deserves. I also think it is incredible that the mother continues to think of Rowen as her daughter even though she is clearly a fairy, as it shows that we have a choice who we love and care for. It is inspiring for me that this was written by a former Presdales student and this helps me believe in my own abilities and potential.

Maddie Hunter